Paula Caceres
5/18/11
Period 8
I feel that my writing has improved throughout the year. What helped me the most was writing the essays. The essays allowed me to put down my thoughts and feelings about a situation. Most of these essays involved arguments and whether you were for or against it.
It was challenging. But the more challenge, the stronger writer you become. What I improved in the most was on an introduction of an essay. That has always been a weakness of mine. On how to start of the writing, how to keep the reader and tell them the main idea of the essay.
I would say what the one thing that improved my writing was the death penalty essay. I said why it should be abolished I gave my thoughts and opinions, and the why it needs to be abolished. I think that made me a better writer.